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Dreaming in Latin, 2: Why We Need New Translations

There is nothing like an obscure Roman poet to curl up with on a dark winter day. I have been reading Valerius Flaccus, a poet seldom read even by Latinists. Very little is known about Valerius Flaccus. Quintilian mentions a writer of that name who died in 95 CE. He writes, “We have recently lost much in [the death of] Valerius Flaccus” (multum in Valerio Flacco nuper amisimus). Classicists love to speculate about the poets’ lives, but there is not much to go on here.

And certainly readers of Latin poetry have lost much in V.F.’s obscurity. His epic poem, Argonautica, is a stunning retelling of the myth of Jason and the Argonauts. And even those of us who are not terribly interested in Jason like to collect tidbits about Medea, sine qua non. We also compare V.F.’s version to to Apollonius Rhodius’s Argonautica, a Greek epyllion (a little epic) written in the third century BCE. But V.F.’s greatest influence is Virgil’s Aeneid, from which he freely borrows phrases, images, and motifs.

There is a horrifically violent scene in Book III of V.F.’s Argonautica. A senseless battle is fought at night, a mass slaughter, which turns out to have been friendly fire on a massive scale. King Cizycus had given hospitality to Jason and the Argonauts, and they parted with warmth, exchanging valuable gifts. But at night Cyzicus mistook them for enemies. Only the intervention of Juppiter prevented the extinction of the Doliones (Cyzicus’s people).

Their grief is ineffable on both sides. The priest, Mopsus (Ampycides), delivers philosophical speeches and performs rites that help them express their grief.

Below is a prose translation of a snippet from Book III, in which the priest prepares for the burial rites. I have omitted a few words that make the English too awkward. Leave it to the poets to solve those problems!


And now sleep had pressed the earth, and dreams were flying around the silent world. Vigilant Ampycides, looking out for the time of the secret rites, seeks the river in the Aesepian woods and runs beside it into the waves of the sea. He purifies his limbs with purple brine and living water, and fits himself for the rites for the deeds that inspired horror.. Then he encircles his forehead with woolen bands, and suppliant with an olive branch, marks out a place for the altars and sacred ritual.

It is time for a new translation of Valerius Flaccus, since not everyone is a Latinist.

Epic Trouble: Lucan Blunders in “Civil War”

civil war lucan penguinYou know you’re in trouble when you start laughing at the epic poem you’ve decided is your winter reading project.

I love epic:  Homer’s Iliad and Odyssey, Lucretius’s De Rerum Natura (On the Nature of Things), Virgil’s Aeneid, Ovid’s Metamorphoses, Dante’s Divine Comedy, Milton’s Paradise Lost, Keats’s Hyperion, Derek Walcott’s Omeros… 

But I have gone astray with my choice here.  The other day I began reading Lucan’s Bellum Civile (Civil War), an epic poem about the power struggles and the civil war between Julius Caesar and Pompey.  What a fascinating subject, I thought.  Historical rather than mythic.  

a lucan readerYou can imagine my horror when I realized this poem is not only dull but deplorablly written.

Vae miserae mihi! (Woe is me!) Don’t pretend you’ve read it. Nobody has.  You’ve never heard of Lucan unless you’re a classics nerd, and that is a good thing, because he is low on anybody’s list. He was a minor Roman poet, a nephew of Seneca, and a frenemy of Nero (who eventually ordered him to commit suicide).  

But I’ve got an adorable Lucan Reader. It was on a syllabus. That’s why I’m reading it.  

lucanLucan attempts to imitate Virgil, but his writing is so labored,  his vocabulary so limited and repetitious,  and his metrical effects so clumsy that you’ll want to cover your eyes.

Here is my literal prose translation of the opening lines:

We sing of wars worse than civil on the Emathian fields, and of the law given over to crime, and a powerful people turned against their own hearts (viscera) with their conquering hand.  

And here is Matthew Fox’s excellent translation in the Penguin, which fascinatingly reflects the actual Latin word order, and I cannot stress how difficult that it is to do.

Of civil wars and worse waged on Emathian fields,/of crime made law we sing, how a powerful people turned on its own heart its conquering hand…

Perhaps the best is Sir Edward Ridley’s translation (late nineteenth century or early 20th).

WARS worse than civil on Emathian  plains,
And crime let loose we sing: how Rome‘s high race
Plunged in her vitals her victorious sword;

Susanna Braund says in the introduction to A Lucan Reader:  “After a protracted lack of appreciation of Lucan’s achievements and years of scholarly neglect, happily there is now an abundance of excellent scholarship to enhance our reading of Lucan. ‘ 

Pity the poor scholar!

I plan to gallop through Lucan and move on.  Any suggestions for alternative epics?